All Comments on 'New Adventures'

That was a great story...I could picture everything perfectly and it was very erotic! I loved the first part when he realized she had been watching him masturbate on the picnic table...that was very erotic and sensuous!

I got very excited as I read it...thank you! ;)

excellent work and great writing. Very visual and realistic detail toeverything, not just the sexual stuff.

Nobody said woot in 1982.

Nice premise.

But, man, you need an editor/proofreader.

Missed opportunity, before he masturbates right in front of her, for her to have asked him all sorts of questions: What do you think about when you masturbate? Do/did you ever think about me? What do you imagine doing to me? Me doing to you?

Did you ever see naked breasts before? Real ones, not in magaznes? What kind of breasts turn you on? Big? Small? Medium?

Four stars.