All Comments on 'New Beginning'

Great start, I hope you will continue with this story.

Michael and his mom know where's the best place for the boy's big hard cock. It's up his own mother's mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole between his mother's legs that he came out of. Michael fucks his mother's cunt with all his youthful energy and strength, giving his mom the best cum of her life, and finally unloading his young balls and shooting his mother a huge twatful of his creamy semen. He'll be doing that a lot from now on.

Erotic, is the word for this story. Thanks.

Wy don't you expand this into a serial?

Would be a perfect beginning for a little series :)

Even though it's a familiar premise, this one gave me high hopes. It delivered. The dynamic between them is perfect. I suppose a mom can prepare all she can for that separation and still not be ready. I think this deserves another chapter, if not a serial.

I love the fact that he is repeatedly fucking his mother with no condom and releasing his seed deep into his mother where it belongs. great story hope to read more.

I hope he succeeds in impregnating him mother and giving her the grandchild all mothers want. It would be so sexy to read about his pregnant mother waddling to his dorm to offer up more pussy to her son or the son fondling her milk engorged breasts or holding her tummy while sliding his baby maker in and out of her womb

Great story! Very hot!

nice build-up to a shattering climax, hot sex, good story-thanks

Even if you look past the fact that the woman was the man and the man was the woman it still had a good build up and decent sex "Get Naked"line was very lame... Guessing you're an alpha female

Would have liked to have read about the shower play. Thats probably a fetish of mine. And the dress that she wore just stirred my imagination.

One very hot story, that I would like to read more of.

Your story telling is good. Background, rising Action, climax, falling action and resolution. As we are still in the climax of the story and there is not yet falling action or resolution, I'm certain there is more to come. I look forward to future chapters. Please don't make us wait long.

Mark

You must have been looking in the window as I enjoy being with my son.

But I have my husband's OK ***

Nice and hot. Great characters to play with keep,it going.

Very erotic and excellent imagery. I was aroused from the beginning right through to the end. A story line you should absolutely keep following.

Buctny8

Very hot and sensual! Love to see more of these two!

Oh Hell Yes!!!

the best place to cum is inside mommy's pussy

Outstanding ! Well written and well assembled a pleasure to read .

I gave it 5 ****** stars . Now is a follow up in order ?

Though Dad must either be a homo or an idiot. Great story, loved the pace of it and how the two of them just adapted to becoming lovers. You have a great talent, can't wait to read more of your work!

WOW! Simply arousing! :-)

Once they got started it was all over but the screaming.

Thanks for your writing! I loved it and it's very "arousing". Can't wait for more!

holy fuck that was hot!!!it made me cum twice!!!!

Beautifully written incestuous love story between mother and son. The sensitivity, passion, adoration, respect, and love expressed between the couple had/was logically developed. This is a love story between equals. There is no positional powerplay. The mother willing acknowledges and accepts the unconditional love, safety. and security the son provides his mother. The son accepts and freely acknowledges that his mother is a woman with the same needs and wants that he has. She is human and he can love her as a woman and his mother.