All Comments on 'New Beginning'

Good start! I can feel the passion here but it needs more? Maybe another chapter would get to where you want to go or what you did? Don't give up on this one as it has such great potential!

I really enjoyed this, because I'm desperately wanting this to happen between myself and an ex girlfriend of mine. I miss her like crazy, and I loved this story. Especially how you ended it, with the open endedness.. Great job!

I'll write more when I'm done masturbating. ...I'm done now, but need to do it again. ...Alright, let's talk. I'm here and hot. Got me thinking. Got me wanting you to write more right (*$%^) NOW!