All Comments on 'New Beginnings Falter'

Yes I think Nikki did come to the wrong conclusion with Dave and Kat's relationship, I only hope that Nikki and Dave can work things out and that was good the way you put Joyce in there also, looking forward to the next part

Thank you for your comments.

I started the next part this morning so it will be a few days before I submit it. I have, however, planned it already and know exactly where it's going. Mikki, Dave, Kat and Joyce all feature prominently.

Whoa! And the plot thickens. I totally understand Mikki's reactions as a "straight" woman now involved with a lesbian. Talk about insecure and still trying to find your way, let along coming out to family and friends. Dave's mistake is obvious for fear of what happened - happening. Next is damage control (?). Mikki being on the rebound was very perceptive by Joyce. So the long commune talk during the drive and the hotel (which seemed a tad too long) worked to subliminally put the idea in Mikki's head of "let's all love and be at peace" - I'm not so sure this will be the case, as Limeylady has so cleverly eluded to. I'm All in on this story. I have sort of slowed down on the Heather series (at 4) - NO one is All that and a bag of chips! Tho I often eat popcorn when I'm reading your stories Limeylady. They are that entertaining.

Fab username, by the way!

Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you are enjoying Mikki's story. I'm about 80% of the way thru the next part, so that will be out soon.

You mention Heather Pt. 04. With the benefit of hindsight, Pts. 02 - 04 are a bit slow (even if Hev is always OTT). Pt. 05 is actually my favourite bit, not least because Stuffypants gets out her handcuffs. The last two parts - 06 and 07 - have more adventure than sex and are a bit shorter. Go on, get out the popcorn and give them a go . . . you know you want to!

Limeylady, I will take you up on your offer to read chapters 5-7 on Heather's Busy Week. Oh what the hell, I just bought more popcorn. Now I have an excuse to make some. Will let you know what I think. Thanks for the response.

I'm glad to hear it and hope you enjoy!

Have been waiting for more about Mikki & Davina .Are there any more in the works?

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Believe it or not, "New Beginnings" was supposed to be a one-off. So much for my best intentions! The fourth part was submitted over the weekend and is currently going thru Literotica's automated publication routine. It should appear in a day or two from now (Monday afternoon in the UK). I'm starting part five (the concluding part) tomorrow.

I'm really digging these stories about Mikki and Dave (and Joyce!). Looking forward to the rest of the series! Thanks for sharing it with us!

Thank you for reading and enjoying it again!

“Hi ho sex on Sunday! My sun was shining!! Let me say it again: Hi ho sex on Sunday!! Yes, my sun was shining brightly indeed.”

An oblique reference to the late great Jeff Beck (24 June 1944 – 10 January 2023). Sadly passed away earlier this month (January 2023) - RIP

D Ellerbeck

As for germanchocolate4u's comment about the drive being too long, that's what happens on the M25, M23 and the A23 into Brighton most days, especially that time of the afternoon

D Ellerbeck