All Comments on 'New Beginnings Revive'

even though I wanted to bypass pages 2 and 3 because it seems like you were getting off track there but I did not,I read almost every word, but I really liked the way you had mikki meet Kat in the bar with dave, now what is mikki going to do to rescue the love of her life, and what about her boss, hopefully we will not have wait to long to find out

Thank you as always for your comments.

The last part is about a week away and should tidy up all the loose ends.

Looks like you getting little off track. I love the way you write and story too. But it looks more like dragged and too much you trying to add. No offense but just feel little off track. But it's 5 stars no doubt.

Shan

Read the last line "I have a plan "

Thank you for your feedback, Shan

I was trying to convey that Mikki was drifting through the week, at a loose end and in the sort of mood where "things happen" almost at random. Maybe I did it too well!!

Indeed I do. I'd like to say it's as cunning as a bag of weasels but it probably isn't as good as al that. It does, however, tie up all the loose ends, in one way or another.

i hope you don't let Mikki just get away with having it both ways. She broke things off with Dave on the suspicion that Dave might be untrue, but meanwhile has been having a veritable sex fest while Dave tries, earnestly to get her back. i sincerely hope that Mikki has to work at it a bit to get Dave back.

Don't worry. Mikki isn't going to get away scot-free.

I echo the sentiments of lesbear and I see you will not let her get off scot-free. I love seeing the cracks in the veneer of Katrina, that was a pleasant surprise. No chick is beyond reproach cause honey her shit along with everybody else's stinks too. Apologies if you don't like the graphics. Dave deserves better than the two of them. Let the "baby lez" continue her romps only to find out the "heart way" that it's empty and shallow. That'll learn her! Ms L. Lady keep up the good work. I still haven't forgot about Heather. I just went to the grocery store yesterday and amongst my things was popcorn. Lol, so I will be getting to that series soon

Thank you for you comments and I don't mind the graphics at all.

I'm still at the planning stage with the final part of Mikki's story but trust me, she's not going to come out smelling of roses.

Meanwhile, enjoy your popcorn!

In this most awesome story collection. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Once again, thank you for reading and enjoying.