by alcalavicci
It is a good story once you get past all of the wrong word usage and misspellings.
I would like to see more of your work but please have someone proof read it first.
This Story was so unreal at least the others made some sense no one is ever gonna teach that
2 4 efort - c wot I mene?
It would have been a fun little piece, if you had proof read it, first.
Lukas
Pointless story and pointless idea never I have read such a wasteful use of a good idea
You had a classic hook that's always interesting... the nympho sex-ed teacher. You even did the sex fairly well, but your grammar and spelling were horrid. You need to proof-read your stuff. I gave you a 4 because it was good, but with that little extra effort, it could've been great.