by sarge64
it was great til daddy was fucking his wife, now it is just going seem like a family fuck fest.
didnt care for how the incest was introduced or adding in that theyre swingers. how long has susan been going behind her husbands back. id be fucking livid if i was him. fuck that. really hope you clear up the murky past. really ruined the build up to the perceived premise of of the harem tale. a bunch of old dudes banging younger women isnt what i hope this is going to be about. hope dad and uncle are ushered out real quick.
Lost interest,this story isnt for me.Its turning into a pile of crap.
Like it until we found out his wife's a whore. And has been cheating on him. And tht there swingers. Don't like the way it's goin. Don't like swinging and cheating. I will maybe read it maybe not. Depends on how it goes.
i agree with the others,
the ''swingers'' part was out of left field.
and i would say the same thing about the incest part,
EXCEPT, it is in the incest category.
duh!!!!!!!
i guess he used it to justify the lack of outrage over sex with daddy,
and so the story didn't have to go to ''burn the bitch''.
looking forward to chapter 4.
After taking over the family business, the very first thing should have been to claim his mother's pussy and may her womb as well!
Nearly three chapters before any Incest and then it's the wife and father. I though it was going to be Blake and his sister and maybe his mum or is that yet to come????? Other than that not a bad story
its very clever. well written, and sexy. on to chapter 4
I tried to give the story a chance but once dad started fucking Susan in front of Blake even though he was fucking Joan just lost interest in this porno script. The writing was fine just not my cup of tea. Maybe one of your other stories is more for me.
dude and all the same script the husband's cuckold accepting silently, he just changes the characters' names because the rest is the same as always
Cuckold alert! Haha. When Susan gave her warning, I knew she didn't ACTUALLY love her husband. More wimp ass "loving wife" crap trying to stain the Taboo genre. GTFO, cuck.
WTH? Really well written but the plot left orbit completely in this chapter. Nothing makes logical sense at any level. So Susan has been cheating on him their entire marriage? Nice try to save it by throwing in a few sentences here and there (like swinging coming out of the blue), but that's the gist of it. 3*