by Arielu
Just when it was really getting good...the chapter is a bit choppy in spots but I'm still loving it. I had a feeling Raina's husband was keeping things from her. I hope she has a damn good plan in the works for dear old husband and stepdaughter. They definitely deserve whatever punishment Raina dish out.
This story really has me going. So many twists...I was so surprised. Now I need to know what else Elana is up to. Good story, different and interesting. Definitely erotic, I never would have thought it up! Update soon.
I like the story very much for the most part (bravo), but the random excessive spacing is extremely annoying.
for me i HAVE TO SAY I LOVE BULL DOZING A WET PUSSY. SO, THE LEAD UP WAS TO LONG FOR ME. Ilovethe description of family fucking each other...step relations.