All Comments on 'New Girl Ch. 02'

You started off with a promising NON CON story in chapter one - complete with blowing through safe words. It seemed like such a great start. Then you follow up with this romance chapter. While it was ok, it just wasn't what I was expecting after such a strong start.

I guess I just got confused by the constant personality shifts in this chapter, and how drastically they flipped from what they were in the first. In chapter one everyone held true to what you described as their nature. But in chapter two, personalities changed with each paragraph. Example, the overly dominant Nikki, who in chapter one, is leaving her boyfriend because she can't get past her need to top a mini-dom like Maric, who initiates and controls the action through the first scenes, and who forcefully ignores the safe word, somehow in chapter two becomes an ass eating/cleaning slave to a slave. What?!?

Perhaps, this is better meant for the BDSM or EROTIC COUPLINGS crowd.

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Sure didn't fit the category nor did it seem related to the first chapter.

I was charmed by the twist ending. It felt like a good shower after a lot of rough play. Nasty and sweet.