All Comments on 'New Horizons'

Well developed story with character development. Seemed real and I love a story with happy ending.

It was a well written story, but i've read this story in some shape or form about 100 times on here. I would say take your writing skills, which are there and try to dream up something more original, I hope that doesn't come across as trollish, its just my observation.

A suggestion to other LW authors too: try using buy, or bought, instead of purchase or purchased. Or, is that how you speak in normal conversation? I think it works in with more a more relaxed writing style.

Written comment without reading story.

I read prologue. Now I know how it ends. Beginnings that flash forward, giving away the story is a pet peeve.

I read epilogue plus 2 paragraphs. Confirmed prologue and added the expected new woman.

I now know story. Why read it?

Sorry. It's that pet peeve.

Paul in Oklahoma

why not post this in Loving Wives, it would get loads more comments and a very high score.