All Comments on 'New Horizons for Nick Ch. 03'

Bad grammar, missing words, missing letters. Poor.

One star.

Use you spelling/ grammar check, also, put the story away for a few days, or a week, and read it with fresh eyes. Read it allowed, if possible, and read it several times before posting. You'll catch little things.

Otherwise, try not making the dom/sub switch be so brutal. Think of it more as a power exchange. Having said all that, it's time for a new chapter. Can't wait.