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hodunkabout 13 years agoGood read so far!
Really like this story for first two chapters, and am looking forward to more. Please continue to write as I am enjoying your efforts.
Littleprickabout 13 years agoOnce again, I like it
It's a good story and I hope you will continue to write it.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNot Bad, Too Much Tell
As stated above, too much tell and not enough show. More dialogue would help.
Welbyabout 13 years agoGood direction
Like where you are going, I know how hard the next chapters are but keep going with this theme. Thanks
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