by slavegirlemily
I laughed myself silly. Nothing about this story was in the least bit, interesting, titillating, sexy or stimulating. Even for a fictional tale it was dumb and unbelievable.
Gag me with a spoon.
Loved your writing. Absolutely fabulous but could tell where the story was leading from the first page. Next time more suspense please. Other than that absolutely brilliant. Read this with my Master and He loved it too ;)
Terrible execution. I attempted to give you only one star, but the system would not let me.
I really like your story.
Thanks for writing it, i hope you make another with the club.