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duanepduanepalmost 16 years ago
storyreview

liked the story the writing and the theme

duanep

TanukiTanukiover 15 years ago
Very well done

I think as a story it's really well done, and the dialogue is terrific. I didn't buy Misty's character though, that she would accept becoming a werewolf just to cum. The scene in which they seduce her was very sensual though, and I'm not into girl-on-girl scenes either!

The two werewolf girls reminded me of the two bad guys in Diamonds are Forever, finishing each other's sentences. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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A very good story and a very enjoyable read. Werewolf stories are my favorite type of story followed by vampire and then succubus. You are a good writer who knows how to tell a good story with a good plot and with excellent character development. I gave you 5-STARS. I would like to see you continue with this story with Angeline and Sophia taking over the pack and the changes they bring to the pack. I know you could end the story here but continuing it would be nice. REtired Army NCO

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