All Comments on 'New Muslim Escort's First Date'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
BEST OF SERIES

...so far.

Zev's switch from shy to mildly agressive was too far too fast. In one episode he should never have gone beyond requesting or polite telling with please. Example: "Lana, would you put just my cock head in your mouth, hold it there while rubbing your tongue on the underside, please? "

"Certainly, Zev, it pleases me to please you."

While some might view dominant behavior (such as the butch dyke episode) as progress and a desirable goal, others of us would view mild behavior as OK or even preferable, and as often a better way to obtain desired results. I think this is the better persona for Zev. (Just sometimes hard for dominant types to conceive.) There is still room in this persona for Zev to lose control as he does in the fucking scene.

5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Amazing story, and incredibly erotic. Just what the author wanted.

Anonymous
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