by SlightlyDivine
...at a great pace. You stayed with the theme, told it as it happened (fiction or not), without the one-syllable vulgarity that appeals to only stroke-story lovers.
This was the best of your stories so far. I didn't make it through the story. I came about halfway through.
I really enjoyed it and shall make a point of reading your other stories.
Very descriptive, very sexy. Looking forward to more from you.
does 'starred' mean? Maybe something with stars on it?
Perhaps you meant 'stared'?
Do please buy a dictionary and learn to use it. Spellcheck won't help you with stupidities like this.
Your story is starred. With one.
I've had some great neighbours in several cities in three countries, but never one like this. Pity.
Good story, well written, just the right length. Loved it.
Only one thing: please look up the difference between lead and led. Then write us some more stories as good as this one