All Comments on 'New Neighbors Ch. 01'

The chapter doesn't seem to end as much as it feels cut off. Running out of page is not a good substitute for completing an idea or portion of narrative.

Decent story, decently written, no mysteries as to where it will lead. Although based on this page, it feels like "group sex" is an overreach. So far it's Gay Male with the wife as decoration. Nothing wrong with that, if it's not pretending to be something else.

Is it a gay story, or, will there be a threesome with Cindy? Is there a 'Mrs. Jeremy'? More background needed please. Story has potential though, write more.

Spend a bit more time on it, add more detail, resolve it.

...a bi 3-some and more-some, I hope!