All Comments on 'New Roommates Become a Threesome'

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 7 years ago
Poorly written.

And pointlessly depressing. With no warning of homosexuality, for those who would have skipped this story.

But who the fuck is Emily? "Goodbye, mother," Emily had said to her mother..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Poor

Yep I got as far as 'Emily' and then 'Joni' and that was enough for me. If you can't get the names right in the first two paragraphs then the rest is not worth reading

Starfan3900Starfan3900almost 3 years ago

This story like you, sucks!

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