All Comments on 'New TV'

by jirinemec1982

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You need an Editor

And really, a decent editor that has a good head on their shoulders to stop some of the crap you wrote in this. G'luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dumb story...

Always when I read at the beginning something like "real happend" I know I should stop with reading. But again I got trapped with an extremly idiotic story that proves the author to be stupid.

Why don't write these authors simply their crap story without announcing "it really happened" and throw it away afterwards without publishing?

jirinemec1982jirinemec1982over 8 years agoAuthor
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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Fuck me! Couldn't get past the first paragraph!

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