All Comments on 'New Year Delivery'

by MaxiMounds

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice

It was good to read but didn't turn me on.

Would have been cute if she knew him...like maybe the boy next door..or the guy who does her lawn work...even her husband or boyfriend. I like those cute twists at the end (just my personal opinion. not complaining)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
5 stars

I felt like it wasn't much about sex, just being a voyeur. It was a really good short story, though!

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
A Little Impersonal

Too much zipless fuck. I didn't get any sense of the characters. And barebacking the pizza deliverer is too adventurous for me. My motto is strictly "no glove, no love."

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