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by eternaldamnation

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Spelling and Proofreading

Good story, but you need to proofread before you submit. Spellchecker is not enough. For example, why do you have shapely "claves," which is a musical instrument, and why did you lie down in "lye" as that would burn your skin?

Keep writing, though!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
A good start

Had some really sexy moments

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