by nevets13
Great style, plausible build-up, great execution. A real cock-stiffener. Thank you.
Straight into another chapter! This was so well written I'm sure that all of your new and faithful readers would want this story continued.
great hot story. Believable story-line. I hope you continue the story or at least keep writing.
I am looking forward to that, hint, hint.
Got this bone up all the way through. Very, very good.
AWESOME loved it !!! Hopefully looking forward to more of this story . Had a hardon the whole time !!! Keep up the good work ..
The story line was good , the story you wrote .... ehh it was okay. It could have been MUCH better if you kept just one simple thing in mind --- contractions are your friend!
A great story that needs to be continued.
They just got together and the story ended !
Jean and Jackie both want him, and that would be a great threesome.
Thanks for the read
Great story, good pace. I'll vote with the others....let's have another chapter at the very least.
Thanks Don
Son is ALWAYS bigger than dad's and I grow weary of reading that all the time.
Story rated 3 stars from me.
I thoroughly enjoy mutually consensual incestuous love stoies, especially between mother and son. The best of these are where the participants are emotionally, mentally, and psychologically mature enough that there is noroom for self-doubt, self-recrimination, self-loathing, shame or guilt. Love has no boundaries. Only humans have self-imposed, artifically create boundaries. The mother's comment that "what they do is no ones business" is correct. 5 star opening chapter for what I hope will be a well writen, logically developed series.