by SexyWriterGuy
Was a good story until the 'infamous 8"+ dick"...
Stopped reading after that....
I admit there are parts of this story that could be changed but the over-all theme is excellent. I enjoyed it and recommend you continue to write more; in fact you could write a part two to this one! Suggestion: 1) you are able to make reference to size just from her expression. 2) just more in detail with multiple persons - instead of wham bam thank you Mamm kinda of thing. Keep it up you did good.
could have been any one of thousands of substandard offerings on Literotica. Five minutes of my life I'll never get back.