All Comments on 'News Story Ch. 07'

Your story is absolutely amazing! There are several errors however and I find that distracting to my enjoyment in reading and imagining the scene. The most frustrating error was when you wrote that you were marrying Mark instead of Brent. Please continue to write, but use an editor or a different one.

This has most of the elements I like - nude bondage, sex, reluctance but not rape. I wish there had been a little more interaction between Jenny/Jean and Jean/Mark, but it's a very good story. Gave it a 5 all around.

I like your writing. Please continue this story. Very hot indeed. Love the BDSM and Bondage especially in both fantasy and real world. Transition Jean and Brent into a 24X7 relationship.

This achingly hot story just keeps on getting better and better - I wonder where, when and how it is ever going to stop! Perhaps, if we're very lucky, it won't - there are stories on some sites into their 40th or 50th chapters!

Extremely satisfying - a really HOT story - thank you, Daisy - more please! 5 *s, of course, and more if I could give them.