by Amyboo
It was OK, I suppose, but certainly not OK enough to deserve the two other comments that have been already been posted. Try making it more believable and cut out all the cliches. (perky nipples??? anal for the 'very first time???)
I loved this! Super good job! Extremly erotic!
Great work!
I loved this! Super good job! Extremly erotic!
Great work!