All Comments on 'Next Door'

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CyssterniusCyssterniusalmost 20 years ago
Hot and Nasty

A great read - very hot and very inventive. Loved the adventures and the wife's involvement at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Amazing

Amazing!!!! This got me off!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
too damn long

the base line was good but the story needed more. the constant swithching of view points was rather anoying it felt like you were reading the story twice at times.

Needs work, really.

asiaprofasiaprofabout 17 years ago
Oh, so hot!

Is a sequel planned?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amaseing

tho my writeing skills arnt the best my reading skills are good and my verbal to. but this was just amaseing, one of the best stories i have read in 10 years off reading erotic storeis. i just loved it, keep up the good work and thanks for giveing me and the others stories like this.

Doctor_who_loverDoctor_who_loverover 16 years ago
Wow

This story was fantastic. Very well written, and extremly hot.

denim_goddessdenim_goddessabout 16 years ago
orgasm

god, that was hot...you just made my day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don't switch

Just don't switch the perspectives, I get it, it's stylistic but damn annoying...

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