All Comments on 'Nice Guy Doesn't Finish Last!'

I understand the desire to get to the sex, but this was a bit rushed. You had a great start to a nice full story, but rushed to the sex scene so fast that much of the story was sacrificed. The ending leaves a lot to be desired. Is she his slave now? Do they become an item? What of the job, living, her dad, etc. too many loose ends for the sake of a spank story.

That restores my confidence in having a sweet, non-predatory nature