All Comments on 'Nice Guys Do Not Finish Last'

by cindy_4u

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice but, one detail....

She took her thong off in the restaurant, and then wore another one in his apartment? Slight edit needed. Strokable otherwise.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 12 years ago
Hot and nasty!

Just the way I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Proofread!!!!

You should try proofreading Your work.... Her "sexy thong" was alredy in his pocket...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You NEED an editor

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Too Much Female

I liked your story very much but didn't like the fact that you (the lady) initiated ALL the action.

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