All Comments on 'Nice Guys Don’t Always Finish Last'

You should continue with the Characters and Maybe introduce a Couple of Female Competitors to keep Charli on her Toes. and see where it all leads and how they end up together or? I Agree an editor would help the Story. But if you can read its not that Bad.

especially if neither knows which one is social climbing. TK U MLJ LV NV

A nice story but too many typos. Please get someone to proof-read your stories.