All Comments on 'Nice Guys Finish Last'

Kind of a role reversal from the norm here.

and then look for someone to blame. TK U MLJ LV NV

Lets hope Eric stick to his words this time. Nicole is selfish and will continue to hurt him. I don't feel sorry for her at all. She let herself be used by the idiot Dorian like a dummy. Eric did a little bit too but he never had any ill intentions.

There should be a conclusion to this. It would be nice to see the good guy get his HEA...with someone he doesn't work with. And Eric getting promoted to a better position then Dorian. He has been humiliated enough by those two.

I have an idea on what I want to do for the second part. It was originally suppose to be just one story. But as I started writing more and more ideas came to me. Anyway thanks all for the comments

I'd definitely see at another chapter.

I like your writing because you make black men feel like real people instead of a ghetto super stud caricature with a "magical big black cock"tm that has no personality or reediming features or the douchbag boss that fucks his employees wives. Overall a good story, it gripped my attention and like i said your characters feel human. And I have meet people with their attitudes so it's also shockingly realistic. I await the next chapter with interest.

Mathew.

Thank you. My characters are reflection of myself. So when writing I try to insert a piece of myself in to every story. Plus I figure I would write about something that is different from the norm. Popular or unpopular

Eric should run, not walk, to the next relationship. Nicole is a submissive.

Hot but has no self esteem.

Not liking Nichole or Dorian.

once a Sucker, always a Sucker, TK U MLJ LV NV

All of your stories are the same, with the same asshole characters.

what the title says ...lol...

remind me to never read another thing you write