All Comments on 'Nice n' Slimy Ch. 01'

This might be your best yet. Once again though the mega sizing. I get it; anime to the extremes but still not a fan.

Didn't like the idea of turning her mom in to a mindless f-doll but The old bitch did just use her daughter as a test subject in a very deadly experiment. So I will have to go with the Slime-girl on this one.

-Robert Thompson

When will Chapter 2 come out?

It might be a while, can't say how long exactly. It will continue though.

A great piece of fantasy and transformation! I hope to see more! Not enough slime girls and not enough strong powerful women! I wonder what you will use the slime girls male parts for?

Oh man! This was fantastic! I cannot wait for a second chapter!!

Awesome and sexy written story. Futa is not my thing but love every word of it.

Have you consider doing stories like this but with symbiotes? Yeah symbiote girls instead of slime. Think about it alien black suited women breast expansion and body transformations. Sounds fun. Could be OCs or women from the spiderman universe.

Completely unrelated but I was also wondering if you can do a story taking place in spider man 3 where the symbiote crash lands on Earth and ends up bonding with Mary Jane Watson instead of Peter Parker? It's okay if you ignore this.

Had potential, but another story ruined by incest.

A literary masterpiece! It does need help from a good editor. (not me)

It is odd how some are so against incest they even object when it is between 2 formerly human aliens! However those who hate stories with male bisexuality often have no objection when the two characters with penises are "female"!