All Comments on 'Nice n' Slimy Ch. 02'

awesome. pls part 3

I'm loving these stories and the world you're building in regards to all of Heather's abilities and mistresses. I was holding out for Heather to absorb someone new, but I guess I'll have to wait for hapter three :P I'd almost like to create my own fanfiction of this...

Please keep writing!

Can't wait for part 3! Keep it up!

this is really good not usually the biggest fan of inflation but this is good

I love this so much omg please make another chapter I have to see what happens!!!

As usual... 5 stars

I kinda like this story. I know it was put up back in May, but I'd still like to see a Chapter 3. Hell, I hope the author is still around.

Please add another chapter!

I will wait for your next chapter.

This is by far one of the hottest things I've ever read. I just feel like this is about to boil over into some amazing extreme fantasy content and I cannot wait.

I'm extra excited for seeing Heather's cock at full length and then erect. Will it be a yard long? 40 inches? And what diameter? 8, 10, 12 inches? I want to see her change Sharon and Wendy and absolutely (almost) destroy them with her massive cock.

I can't wait for more!!

2 years since I found this, disappointing there hasn't been a third chapter yet.

Over 80 to 90% of the stories in Erotic Horror and Unhuman sections are UNFINISHED just like this story. The writers get their joys off throwing the readers under the bus by not finishing their stories. What really pisses my ass off is a writer who writes 7-8 chapters then just up and stops writing. Yes, I know they do it for free and that sometimes things happen in their lives that fore go them writing. BUT NOT 80 to 90% OF THE WRITERS. Why even start a story if you have no plans to finish the story. Especially if you write 6 chapters or more? The writer(GrimmsOther Brother) of "New Moon" in this section has an excuse for not finishing his excellent werewolf story, he died in an car accident. What is the writer's excuse for not finishing this excellent story? Wardmaster 91D70

I feel you. The Sci-fi/Fantasy and Nonhuman categories have basically 2 finished stories. Only one I can think of is "A Most Graceful Life", which ran for 12 chapters and ended nicely, including an epilogue. I am, of course, not speaking of single-submission works, only those that are broken up into chapters over time.

It doesn't so much bother me that an author's life takes them away from Lit and they drop off the face of the planet. What bothers me is when an author gets me hooked into a story, then switches to a completely different story and never comes back to the one I had been reading. Again, I can understand that a block could form and it might take a while to recover, but to just completely give up on a story and then tease me over and over again with submissions to different stories, which also, btw, never get finished is maddening. If a story is getting great ratings, why not at least try to finish it off before, or even while you work on your new stuff?

I know the chance is slim but I would love this story to continue.

This is so good, and I love the slight corruption theme going on

doubt this will continue...

this part was in 2016 and now is 2022.

author look like they abandon this story.

This version of the story is dead, however I do want to make a new version someday. Between personal life and other story obligations, it's just gonna take a long time. Sorry for everyone that really enjoyed it.

take your time but id be thrilled whenever you get to revamp this story. i love the inner struggle that come with trying to fight the changes and the human connection with sharon

this was a really good read so far....i really hope you find the time to continue it.

This had the potential to be a true literary masterpiece! Too good for Literotica. I'm not a fan of sexual parts that are impossibly large, but this one was not a quick stroker for the futa fans. Science fiction is hard to do well and it is so easy to paint yourself into a corner if you don't have the whole plot worked out in advance.

The great science fiction authors often follow this rule: Only have one impossible thing. The rest follows from that and accepted science and engineering. So in this story, alien organism that profoundly alters its human hosts - ok. Also induced hallucinations of huge body parts -ok. But adding body parts that actually violate the laws of physics and biology - not ok.

After Lewis Carrol it has not been good for stories to end "it was all a dream". Also it is not good to have so many impossible things that the author doesn't have to worry about painting themself into a corner.