by MalDufleurs
You played nicely with the two storyline. The characters are vivid, the sex is hot and hardcore! Thanks!
That was by far one of the best stories I've read on Literotica in a long, long time! I'd love to read more about the dirty adventures of Penny - she made herself out to be such a "nice" girl that was corrupted to take her bosses' neighbour up her arse, but actually was QUITE dirty: what if she's done similar things in the past while still maintaining that "good girl" persona?
Loved it
DownUnderGuy
The sex is hardcore, the characters are vivid, and you even managed to build up a second story line with the porn movie. You played it well! I think I just found a new favourite :)
"If you haven't seen Pirate Slut 3, it has a lot in common with Pirate Slut 1 and Pirate Slut 2 though personally I believe it's the finest part of the Pirate Slut trilogy. And if you haven't seen them they have a lot in common with every other porn flick ever made. "
Could not stop laughing.
Great story! Fine writing!
Easily the best story I have read in a very long time. Please write a sequel or series
THIS is what erotic writing is supposed to be! Well done! Look forward to reading more of your work!
Story-within-as-story, and told with perfect timing and rhythm. I look forward to the next thousand nights of storytelling! As other posts have said, this was stellar writing! Can't be read without leaving a comment. Please, more sir.
So well done, great pace, very very sexy...
I have a fantasy that is so similar! Have you read my mind? Bravo.
Well told.
Would have liked some more foreplay with teasing, and edging before they got to the main ass fuck.