All Comments on 'Nice to Meet You'

real love your story, i just found. nice to meet you. brilliant writing awesome story. it would be a waste to stop now.

It's a bit too unrealistic. His English should be choppy and he should say more things in German.

And the screaming? Try moaning.

The various derogatory terms (esp. for body parts) also kill the mood of the tale.

It was pretty well-written until she followed him back to the bedroom. After that the sex part was too over-exagerated and sloppily written.

I does have great potential but it needs to be edited and revised. The ending sex scene needs to be a tad more romantic and drawn out.