All Comments on 'Nick & Jay, In Service to Each Other Ch. 02'

by darkwolfone

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whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrover 9 years ago
Great so Far!

Love your story so far. Clearly there's fraternization going on -- and frankly, I'd love to see the Airman being the one who generally dominates the Officer....a role reversal out of the office so to speak! Keep it coming and thanks!

JustforthefunJustforthefunover 9 years ago

Very well written. I am looking forward to more!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

This deserves a fresh comment: your writing style is great. That and two hunky airmen? Nice…

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