All Comments on 'Nicki Submits Ch. 04'

15 minutes isn't long enough to say if you want to wear collar and all it entails, she didn't ask about who else would be using her and a safe word is there for a purpose,shouldn't be made to feel guilty for using it.

Phem: as far as I am aware Nicki and Tom are not members of your club or participants in your community. They are fictional characters in an erotic story. If you want them to join, why not write a story in which they do?

There is no love mentioned or any hint of any feeling between the two. This story is about as erotic as a board meeting discussing a contract. He is about as appealing as a CEO laying down all the terms, all take and no give. What she expects to get out of this business arrangement is anybodies guess, but it will not be love and commitment. Sorry but its a big 'turnoff'.