All Comments on 'Nickie and Me'

If you have a second chapter in you, I would like to see where this might go. What happens with his SIL?

Hope you have another chapter or two left for this one. Really enjoyed reading this one.

Please continue. Very good story!

Really well written. Very hot! I gave it five stars and a favorite point. My only criticism was the ending. It felt like it stopped in the middle of a conversation. It needed to be wrapped up a little better.

One problem though, I know its the next day the baby doll nighty wood still look fantastic with bagels and eggs sunny side up! The fur and heels and a ride, with or without the car.

But the ending should have been the halfway point in the story. You cut it way to short. Stories like this aren't really stroke stories, they are so much more.

Really abrupt way to end the chapter, it feels like it was cut short.