All Comments on 'Nicki's Journey Ch. 01'

This story had me so excited. I couldn't put it down. I'll wait with anticipation for more chapters.

A bit too fantastic for my taste, and a bit faster moving than I like, but altogether a pretty good story. I'd try to work a bit more on overall pacing and do a bit more character development.

Fantastic story! I love erotica from a lady's perspective. I can't wait to see more!

unreal in fact but a fun read,,,,,,taks imagination yet erotic hard on material