All Comments on 'Nickolas and Jason Ch. 07'

by RobMontague

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StarMAPStarMAPabout 14 years ago
Love it love it love it!

I've read this story over and over so many times! I just love it. Its beautiful, even if that dumb Spider had to sleep with someone else, i'm glad they finally officially got together. I love your stories, they have so much emotion. . Anyway keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantastic

The entire series is wonderful and sweet, but this last chapter seemed a little rushed and short. Doesn't mean I didn't love it though!

MabelCinnamonMabelCinnamonabout 14 years ago
I waited...

I was kinda apprehensive about this series, but I loved it when I started and waited for the end... Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love it ... but need a lil more!

I do love this series and have been following it very faithfully but I agree with that last comment. This last chapter while lovely did seem a bit rushed and it didn't really have a climax. I think Nick and Spider needed a lil more of a dynamic ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
amazing

i just read the whole story and it was so sweet i especially liked spiders reason 4 why he calls nick twinkle

Purr_AlainaPurr_Alainaabout 14 years ago
Would really love....

to read more of your stuff! I loved 'The love of Leander' and this one just as much!

XX

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
i hate that

perfect story til he fucked her! and then he just gets away with it?! jeez, make him beg!

12tigger3412tigger34about 13 years ago
Like it but..

I dont think lion and trevors love is reflected in this one much, trevor seems more into nile in this one but i still liked it x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Unbelievable and rushed. How he could go from fucking a girl to telling Nick he's in love with him doesn't add upl.

lonleylucaslonleylucasabout 11 years ago
NOT REDING THE REST

THERE HAPPY WHY SEE THE OTHER STUFFF

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