by RobMontague
I've read this story over and over so many times! I just love it. Its beautiful, even if that dumb Spider had to sleep with someone else, i'm glad they finally officially got together. I love your stories, they have so much emotion. . Anyway keep it up!
The entire series is wonderful and sweet, but this last chapter seemed a little rushed and short. Doesn't mean I didn't love it though!
I was kinda apprehensive about this series, but I loved it when I started and waited for the end... Great work!
I do love this series and have been following it very faithfully but I agree with that last comment. This last chapter while lovely did seem a bit rushed and it didn't really have a climax. I think Nick and Spider needed a lil more of a dynamic ending.
i just read the whole story and it was so sweet i especially liked spiders reason 4 why he calls nick twinkle
to read more of your stuff! I loved 'The love of Leander' and this one just as much!
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perfect story til he fucked her! and then he just gets away with it?! jeez, make him beg!
I dont think lion and trevors love is reflected in this one much, trevor seems more into nile in this one but i still liked it x
Unbelievable and rushed. How he could go from fucking a girl to telling Nick he's in love with him doesn't add upl.