All Comments on 'Nick's Quest Pt. 04'

nick the chum.

Hey asshole tell all of us why your wife left you! No? I'll do it. You're nasty and have a small cock and you blow. Gave it a 5

loved the first chapter but as the story went on i just cant see it coming to a logical ending just more of nick being more and more i do believe i'm done with this story it has drug out as far beyond my interest i had high hopes but i'm not into wimp stories

its not believable at all. they dont even have a relationship, she comes over and fucks him sometimes, just like 20 other women. they never spend any time together or anything, there is no reason he would put up with this.

Sorry you are not enjoying Nick's Quest that much, netslacker and jsh1138. It really was written to be not believable. I mean, who would have that much sex? Certainly not me. Ever.

Really did not mean to write Nick as a "wimp". He is the main character (title character even!) and he is at the forefront of most of the activities. The guy is getting laid!

Why do people think that Leigh is getting the best of him so much? He is having as much fun, if not more, than Leigh. Oh well. The next part is the last, so it will wrap everything and everyone up, but not before there is a lot more fun to be had.

Juvenile? Perhaps. But it was fun to write and even more fun to post and get the reactions I've received. Thanks all for reading, voting and commenting!

Leigh is just pissing all over Nicks back and telling him it is raining.

He is being led by the dick by someone who wants to be a totally unpaid whore for everyone and be loved unconditionally by him because he’s the only one dumb enough to take it