All Comments on 'Nicola Nefertiti'

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The NavigatorThe Navigatorabout 15 years ago
Didn't deliver

Well written. But too contrived, too predictable. We never really got to know the two main characters. It had a lot of possibilities, but there should have been some surprises, a deviation or two from the obvious script.

SqueezeplaySqueezeplayabout 15 years ago
Tender story

I liked it. Maybe a little similar to other stories , but it was well written and enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very nicely done - fresh twist

Really liked this. A bit of an old hat situation treated with a very fresh approach that makes it sparkle. I like the Nefertiti touch. And very sexy when she gets down to it.

PennLadyPennLadyabout 15 years ago
Very sweet

This was just very sweet. Don't know what else to say about it. I enjoyed it very much, so thanks. :)

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

You romance stories are good but too short

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I've worked some interesting and even sometimes influential jobs, and also spent quite a few years of my life writing for a living. I thought writing the occasional piece of erotica would be fun. It's also nice to publish and see direct reactions.

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