by quandom
Well written. But too contrived, too predictable. We never really got to know the two main characters. It had a lot of possibilities, but there should have been some surprises, a deviation or two from the obvious script.
I liked it. Maybe a little similar to other stories , but it was well written and enjoyable.
Really liked this. A bit of an old hat situation treated with a very fresh approach that makes it sparkle. I like the Nefertiti touch. And very sexy when she gets down to it.
This was just very sweet. Don't know what else to say about it. I enjoyed it very much, so thanks. :)