All Comments on 'Nicole & Damian Ch. 01'

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josephstevens over 11 years ago

Promising!

Great first story...can't wait to see where it leads....

Hilary91 over 11 years ago

amazing

Can't wait to read more.

Erotonaut over 11 years ago

'Fetish' or..?

This would easily have slipped into 'First Time', but I suspect you intend to develop this into a full-on control story, in which case you might eventually stray into 'BDSM' or even 'Non-Consent/Reluctant'. Whichever, I look forward to reading more of these characters (perhaps her older sister might get embroiled, too?).

Nice debut, if brief. Welcome aboard.