All Comments on 'Nifty At Fifty'

by jack_straw

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Nightowl22Nightowl22almost 18 years ago
Damn!

The sex could kill ya!

A good, hot, loving wife story!!!

sherlock40sherlock40almost 18 years ago
Now, that is a loving wife story!

Excellent story and very hot. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good take on what a loving wife could be

but I have NO idea what a nuclear cock is!

Regards, DJ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
one of the best stories on this site

loving wife at her best.that what a loving wife is suppose to be.to me some people don't no what a loving wife is.

TX CharlieTX Charliealmost 18 years ago
WOW

this is the best loving Wife story I have read in a very long time.

Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 18 years ago
I liked it until...

the author said "nuclear cock" which made me think of the Six Million Dollar Man and things went downhill from there. I apologize, jack_straw, for cackling insanely as I finished the story with images of very big mechanical dicks covered with blinking lights fucking oily mechanical pussies in some sort of very weird psycho-cybernetic world where older men don't take pills for ED, they get mechanized cock transplants. ;)

And they say erotica isn't fun? What do they know?

Thanks, jack, for a fun time even if it wasn't quite what you intended.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Neither Will Make It To 60

but what a way to go - You da Man Jack and need no stand of candles. Your variety is showing more than well.

But I am concerned with your volume lately - It is all great but don't linger over the candle too long and get burned out before our and your time.

Be Proud Rascal - Know that you are appreciated!

With very High Regard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great

She sure is nifty!

Boyd

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 17 years ago
Fantastic lust and romance in a loving wife

Thank you for the great entertainment and superb writing

PT

sirsemegasirsemegaover 15 years ago
NICE

We all have fantasies, but guess what, most of the time those fantasies are much better than if it happened in reality. Playing with her fantasies like that, they didn't need a third person in the bed, just use the largest sex organ that we people have, the Brain!

Well done, I appreciated the fact that the cliche of bringing in some strange would make things much better.

roscovichroscovichalmost 13 years ago
Jack,

I'd bet you that you always wanted to say that !

Otherwise good story.

phil2213phil2213almost 11 years ago
That's a wonderful story of a loving couple

This is the way life should be at its very best. Love can be the best of times as illustrated by this amazing author.

Tim413Tim413almost 11 years ago
What a

nice story. It's a good thing she packed a pair of shoes the went well with her new red dress. (HA!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
For Real

THAT ! is a serious "Loving Wives" story. Thank you, jack_straw.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Pedestrian

Flat, boring, typical LW fare

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Great story, ignore the complete idiot below me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
What

What a load of crap.

whateverittakeswhateverittakesabout 3 years ago

No cucks, no RAACs, no BTBs, just a good old fashioned love story. What a lucky couple they are.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

UTTERLY BORING....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Was cute and fun.

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