All Comments on 'Night Bus'

very horny story, so much passion from the author, gotta read em all . bye

Each and every one of -litpervgrrl-'s lesbian(especially lesbian I should say) stories really put me in the mood. I don't know if she writes from experience or imagination, but wherever the origins of her stories are is a place I long to be. The girls in the stories have such a raw, energetic sexual zest for their lover it makes me get chills. Wow. This story takes the cake though...first class girl/girl fuckFESTIVALfun. blunt stick to the nuts type writing. keep up the good work.

A nice story, with good buildup.

If the writer can include some twists in her future stories it would be great.

keep the good work

You can't have sex on a bus like that! Believe me, I've tried. What's up with the use of the term....diddle? If someone tried to "diddle" my clit, her ass would be out the door. Mitsko is not even an asian name, it should be Mitsuko, what did you do, drop a spoon down a cliff and write down what sounds it made?

I just want to say your story was great, and that "Anonymous" should be ignored. Because while the feedback area is for positive and or negative criticism, it is not a place to be a bitch.

I thought it was a hot fantasy and the bus-fucking scene was great, one of my favourite fantasies. You're a fabulous writer of lesbian scenes, but anonymous prick was right about Mitsuko... it 'should' have a U in it.

xxx.Sadie