All Comments on 'Night Class: The Final Chapter'

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The_PedantThe_Pedantabout 9 years ago
Sugary!

All too, too, perfeck :-)

BTW - "gotten" is a horridly ugly word!

Yes, I know it's American usage, along with the equally horrid "visit with", when the meaning is clearly " talking with"

gravyruggravyrugover 13 years ago
Nice enough

I would've preferred more dialogue, and it seemed to rush through some important bits. More showing, less telling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great story

absolutely beautiful

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