All Comments on 'Night Job Ch. 04'

by bluemono

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More please

This is a great story makes me wish it was happening to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yes! Please!!

Please continue to write more. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I love the stories. My only complaint is that they are too short. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story

I love the premise. Please write more.. And longer

Is better! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

When is the next chapter going to be done? I am (im)patiently waiting! I do agree with the previous comments though...it would be nice if the chapters were longer.

bluemonobluemonoalmost 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you guys and the next one is slightly longer. It is in the pending box so will be available soon =) .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Patiently Waiting...

Can't wait for Ch. 5. Loved all of them so far. Don't stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The girl is like a robot.

He doesn't ever try to please her sexually--it's all about him and his rigid control. Yeah, I know this is an extreme form of submission that some people get off on, but to me it just turns her into a passive, very uninteresting character with no personality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Training comes in all forms.

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