by Mason_Hess
Predictable. Once I determined what was happening, I lost interest in the story.
Contrary to what some may say, you wrote carefully enough to hint the ending without ruining the sensations she was feeling. I think I felt more willing and excited, knowing that she was not truly unhappy or unsafe.
Nicely done. You described the scene just enough. You might have added that she saw the knife earlier to have it seem to be just a tool he used to cut the tape with. Then spring the knife as a threat. Good story!