All Comments on 'Night of Longest, Strongest Orgasms'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Was this an essay?

This story read as if you were writing an essay to explore sensuality!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Liked the writing but ending seemed truncated; We made love great, stayed friends for a couple of years and then went our merry way - REALLY? Just seems like there should be so much more. As the author seems to be very into BDSM, perhaps she should have tied Linder up for more fun?

One funny comment, for some reason the name "Lindner" was so unusual to me, it really distracted me; not sure why.

In the end, fun but could have been wrapped up better.

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