A good idea for a story & a great title. A little shakey here and there with the period dialogue especially on the first page, but the writing improved as the story progressed.
The goal in my work (at least at this moment) is to envision some kind of utopian sexual space that could still possibly exist. And I want to make stories people can masturbate to, obviously. Hopefully I succeed at one of the two of those things! Latest update: My 50th stor...