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by 100yearrain
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Anonymousover 7 years agoYou need an editor
Your story could be great. I'm guessing english is not your native language. Please get an editor who's more fluent in English than you for your next story.
Mike1154over 7 years agoThank you
Brilliant and artistic - perhaps a journey into the imagination - but magic does happen to strangers in the night. You are a great story teller.
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